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what am i to feel
Contributed by
desire
on
Friday, 3rd January 2014 @ 08:51:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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is this even real
What am I to feel
Could it be, or is just a nightmare
That I have to live through and bare
I'm still trying to grasp the whole WE ARE GETTING MARRIED part
The very words that shattered my Heart
Into a million pieces, right on the kitchen floor
Pieces that won't heal together any more
standing here trying to shake those words out of my head in some way
But like a broken record, they only replay
I feel the tears, but I refuse to let them slide down my face
Because I know hurt is ready to find a place
But where, because my heart is shattered into a million pieces on the kitchen floor
And my very soul is protected only by a fragile door
So I shall feel nothing for him, from this day forth
My mission to love again is mission abort
So as I walk past the shattered pieces of my heart on the floor
I let one tear fall, because there would be no more
Those were my thoughts as I walked out the door
Because love doesn't live here anymore
Copyright ©
desire
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2014-01-03 08:51:42]
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Re: what am i to feel
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 3rd January 2014 @ 12:41:45 PM AEST
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| Your words carry such intensity - the heart tears as one follows your write. You convey emotion to a deep level. Very nice write. Thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: what am i to feel
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by thistle_and_fern on
Friday, 3rd January 2014 @ 04:46:47 PM AEST
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Think most of us at some point in time have had our hearts shattered and you put this so well in your poem.
Thank you for sharing this |
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Re: what am i to feel
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by christybthepoet on
Friday, 3rd January 2014 @ 09:18:33 PM AEST
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| Powerful depiction of that moment when it seems the heart will never again regain what has been ripped away. |
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Re: what am i to feel
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by GloomyBlu on
Saturday, 4th January 2014 @ 11:54:02 AM AEST
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| i enjoyed your use of imagery and your personification of love. |
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Re: what am i to feel
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th January 2014 @ 10:48:18 PM AEST
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| I love how the emotional intensity of the poem just draws me in. The way you're able to make me experience the pain and sadness conveyed by the poem is great! :) |
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Re: what am i to feel
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st May 2014 @ 04:42:00 PM AEST
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this is so beautifully heartfelt, great style and
flow, may your heart heal...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: what am i to feel
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 25th November 2014 @ 08:05:55 AM AEST
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This is wonderful. Packed full of authentic emotion and written with flair. Great style.
I hope your heart is well on the mend by now.
~Scorp |
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