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Drifting away upon a cloud.
Contributed by
JimKoz
on
Thursday, 9th January 2014 @ 08:22:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Smile on my face as I drift away upon a cloud.
Beautiful escape from that whole crazed filled crowd.
It's lovely up here, only thing that exists is the state of bliss and peace.
Up here I can go anywhere I please, next stop will be Greece.
As I touch down in a brand new place, merriment lurks throughout.
No sense of melancholy or forlorn about.
I think that I may stay here awhile out of reach.
If you need me, find me, dancing with my love along the beach.
Try not to be shocked for things are rarely ever what they seem.
I woke this morning feeling down for all of it was just a dream.
Copyright ©
JimKoz
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2014-01-09 20:22:02]
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Re: Drifting away upon a cloud.
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th January 2014 @ 09:17:26 PM AEST
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Beautiful write.
It's amazing what we dream some times.
Blessings, smiles, dreams,
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Re: Drifting away upon a cloud.
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 10th January 2014 @ 10:14:25 AM AEST
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I really liked this write. You described your dream wonderfully.
Great poem! |
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Re: Drifting away upon a cloud.
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 10th January 2014 @ 07:10:02 PM AEST
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| Dreams can be such wonderful experiences. I envy anyone who has a beautiful dream. :) |
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