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Deemed
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Friday, 17th January 2014 @ 03:27:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Confusion doth reign
In life's diminishing game
Dispensing punishing pain
Disguised within hate's rain
Hearts run in blinded rage
Waiting for time's last page
Souls seek one last shelter
Unaware it won't matter
Calm escapes a hectic mess
Peace deserted with the rest
Silence fills the empty spot
Death claims the entire lot
Copyright ©
dvtpdw
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2014-01-17 15:27:45]
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Re: Deemed
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by serenarose on
Saturday, 18th January 2014 @ 11:00:02 PM AEST
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