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Words no one will read (the sixth dream)
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Saturday, 18th January 2014 @ 10:48:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The sixth dream
I have walked many paths I have stumbled Struggled
I have been cleansed By of a torrent of rain Washing away streetlights and cars
I have seen friends pass Broken by needles Loveless and alone
I have held a man as he cried For the hurt he committed And I have been held
How rigid and hard These lines have grown How sloppy and bland
I have hurt someone I love Just to hurt them
I have plead for humanity And I have spit on the supplication Of another's love
I have called her whore Dredged up every dirty secret I have cast my own love away
The sixth dream is written With words no one will read
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Re: Words no one will read (the sixth dream)
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Saturday, 18th January 2014 @ 11:35:14 PM AEST (User
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If we had to check off each revelation you make, most of us would probably have quite a row of checkmarks! I went back for a re-read to immerse in the emotion and not just the thought.
Enjoyed this very much.
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Re: Words no one will read (the sixth dream)
(User Rating: 1 ) by GloomyBlu on
Sunday, 19th January 2014 @ 02:25:12 AM AEST (User
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what words will you read today? |
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