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Bye
Contributed by
me
on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Once more I say goodbye
Before wasn't enough
You must know
I'm leaving
I don't want to
But you forshook me
Long ago
You kept me at a distance
Anticipating my departure
Always walking me towards the door
Shut it now behind me
So I can hide my smeared face
behind the glass
Your love,
Already a forgotten dream
Is sitting at a darkened window
Watching,
Waiting,
for me to leave
And thus it will be burried
in an eternal past,
Smeared
with mascara and snot,
Smothered
in restless pillows,
And drowned
in other kisses.
Goodbye my dear
We've parted
long ago!
Copyright ©
me
... [
2003-05-18 15:05:00]
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Re: Bye
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 09:41:12 AM AEST
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I look back to both of our past experiences with our "first love".. and i wonder how true was it. real it was for what it stood for... but how true was it over all?... when we say bye.. i tend u wonder and evaluate what once was there... and i come to the conclusion that perhaps i saw what i wanted to see.. and everything was a reflection of me.
if it wasn't for this poem.. i would not have remembered that.. your poems are very real.. simple .. but deep.
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