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Empty, Broken, Bruised, Sore
Contributed by
cherryamber
on
Sunday, 26th January 2014 @ 05:05:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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im empty
broken
bruised
sore
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im empty of the voices, the suicide dreams, the torment that used to threaten me
im broken, there are fragments of me in everybody, in the dew on the cherry blossoms, the cotton of the clouds, yes I am divinely shattered
im bruised, purple, the colour of royalty and heaven, the tone of the sanctified, the shades of my inner imagination, even if dealt by the hand of another
im sore, from the burn of lighting the sun, and how far I have to swing to get from star to star, from being in a world i know i never came from
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Re: Empty, Broken, Bruised, Sore
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by TylerSpeaks on
Sunday, 26th January 2014 @ 05:11:58 PM AEST
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Wow! I really have no words! Wish I had your talent!
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Re: Empty, Broken, Bruised, Sore
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by Dark_Zephyr on
Monday, 27th January 2014 @ 02:56:22 AM AEST
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| Gorgeous |
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Re: Empty, Broken, Bruised, Sore
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by Dark_Zephyr on
Monday, 27th January 2014 @ 02:56:23 AM AEST
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| Gorgeous |
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Re: Empty, Broken, Bruised, Sore
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by potentialpoet96 on
Tuesday, 28th January 2014 @ 12:28:53 AM AEST
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| I honestly wish I had something to say. This seriously left me speechless! I really enjoyed this! Keep writing. You have so much talent! |
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Re: Empty, Broken, Bruised, Sore
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 28th July 2014 @ 10:34:49 PM AEST
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I stand and applaud
Excellent poem...... |
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