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As I lay in my bed
Contributed by
szangl
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Friday, 31st January 2014 @ 05:05:19 PM in AEST
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As I lay in my bed
Racing thoughts flow through my head
With my eyes shut tight
It is one dreary night
The night has fallen without a sound
No one walking across the ground
Not a sound from a cow
Nor a hoot from an owl
No wind for a breeze
There is stillness in the trees
These are the thoughts running through my head
As I lay in my bed
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2014-01-31 17:05:19]
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Re: As I lay in my bed
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by softerware on
Sunday, 2nd February 2014 @ 12:32:08 AM AEST
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If this is any example, you should write all your works from your bed! You did a wonderful job of parading your thoughts across the page, one by one, single file..ruling out the daytime one indicator at a time.
What a silent night!
thank you for defying the silence with your thoughts!
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Re: As I lay in my bed
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st May 2014 @ 11:08:19 PM AEST
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beautiful, welcome to ypdc,
hugs n' love nessa |
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