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Can't Believe
Contributed by
FastGuy
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Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Cant Believe
I Cant Believe It, It Cant Be True
This wasnt the way me sitting next to you
It was just a few words I will forever regret
I can still remember the first words, that day we met
I didnt mean to, I promise, I want to take them back
I cant believe it, my anger, my words, how thoughtless I can act
I love you, I mean it, I truly do
But now Im sitting here wishing there was something I could do for you
It was all really simple and I blew it way out of proportion
I made it seem like you were having an abortion
The day was perfect, and you did it all for me
Now in your arms is where Im longing to be
You left so quickly, and it hit me so fast
Why I cant change my ways, and forget the past
You loved me I know it, like no one else could ever show
For me there was no extent to the distance your love would go
I gave it all up, and now Im dying
How I couldnt just treat you good and keep you from crying
We shared so many beautiful days, long walks on the beach
Did I think that it would all come to a halting screech
Baby please forgive me, Id give anything, even get down on my knees
I know I dont deserve it, why should I, did I ever hear your pleas
Baby wake up, I need you and Im here
Sitting here next to you, and losing you is my biggest fear
When you left, I felt a distance between us
So odd, but I figured you were upset from hearing me curse
Baby I got so cold, and I my mind starting racing
That phone call confirmed, and I couldnt stop pacing
It was the tears baby that kept you from seeing that sign
And now Im the one at fault for you laying here dying
They said it happened so fast, and you probably didnt feel a thing
But baby I felt it all, and now my heart, forever bleeding
Im holding your hand so tight baby hoping you can hold on to that one last breath
I know now baby, my life will forever be changed, but baby why did it have to be because of your death
The tragic trials and tribulations of our lives. Be very careful what we say each day, it may just be the last thing they ever hear
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FastGuy
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2003-05-18 22:05:00]
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Re: Can't Believe
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by shelby on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 10:21:27 PM AEST
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This is such a heart breaking poem. This really touched me. You are so very right. Iv always known that words can often hurt worse than a broken bone. Im sorry that this happend. Well written touching poem with a very good message for all of us!!
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Re: Can't Believe
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by TheeCductress on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 11:54:23 PM AEST
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| This is an amazing write! I can feel your pain! It is hard when someone you love is there before you slipping away into deep eternal sleep and you feel nothing but regret! Be strong. Keep up the good work. Alicia |
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Re: Can't Believe
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 12:18:23 AM AEST
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WOW!!!! This is a terrific write... so well done. The pain was depicted so vividly... Hope to see lots more from you..
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