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Away flew the Crow
Contributed by
shelby
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Sunday, 9th March 2014 @ 03:21:59 AM in AEST
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There you all were again
speaking sharp tongued.
Teasing me,taunting me
my fine dark feathered ones.
I caught you today
but never snatched a feather.
You trick me so
flitting to and fro
sky riding suddenly
to the sun.
Just above my reach
just out of my sight.
Hiding tall above me
Chatter talk, delight
or trickery?
Once in awhile
a shadow passes
my memory
and fades off into another time.
Away they flew with you
fine tuned
dark shadows
Away flew the Crow.
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shelby
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2014-03-09 03:21:59]
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Re: Away flew the Crow
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 9th March 2014 @ 10:06:27 AM AEST
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I really like the ending, "Once in awhile
a shadow passes
my memory
and fades off into another time."
very well phrased..captures a perfect subtlety. |
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Re: Away flew the Crow
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 9th March 2014 @ 08:24:22 PM AEST
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Ah my friend..just reading the title threw me off guard. My first thought was that the "Crow" has left... (Silly I know).. but good write as always..
Jenni_K |
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Re: Away flew the Crow
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 10th March 2014 @ 11:32:07 AM AEST
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nice photo and a throughly enjoyable write my friend
Shari |
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Re: Away flew the Crow
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 04:36:00 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful! love the picture too,
hugs n' love nessa |
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