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What Can I Do?
Contributed by
ruby_star_angel
on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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There's too many obstacles, too many choices
Inside my head, I hear so many voices
I swear I try to keep my life on track
But its so hard, I can't always react
I'm doing the best to keep myself sane,
But without your help, its just not the same
Suicide crept inside my mind; it stays
I could hear its cold voice whisper its many ways
All these question swirl in my mind
My past stalks me; I can't leave it behind
All of those thoughts and memories takes me breath away
Someday, it will all disappear. Someday..
Should I wait for some kind of sign?
Or take my life away; make death mine
For now, I'll just sit and wait
For maybe, I may collide with fate
Every day, I watch everyone around me
I can't take it; they're all so happy
Why am I the one who can't contend?
Why is my wish for my life to end?
At night I lie in my bed, wide awake
I go insane every now and then, its my sake
I'm so used to it, I don't mind it anymore
Insanity is closer to me now then it was before
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Re: What Can I Do?
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 12:10:37 PM AEST
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Wow, i found this very close to home. I just LOVED your style of writing. The second stanza stood out to me the most..
keep writing it out, and you can pm me if you ever feel like it...
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Re: What Can I Do?
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 05:27:39 AM AEST
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I feel the pain, understand the hurt, and I loved this poem.
Keep up the writting you are very good at it and I look forward to more of your work.
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