|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
In Limbo
Contributed by
Houseofleaves
on
Monday, 17th March 2014 @ 05:07:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
I eke out a life between two Gods
One I love and the other is in pain
It is strange to love one that is bad
It is even more strange to love
and not be loved back
In the clear bath water is a perfect image
A face handsome and clean
There are no misunderstandings
Or misgivings
Only the delusion of peace
Behind my portrait is a hole in the wall
Where a mother cried in the hallway
Where a boy and girl laughed
During the daytime
Copyright ©
Houseofleaves
... [
2014-03-17 05:07:08]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: In Limbo
(User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 18th March 2014 @ 07:13:51 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This made me read it again and then some more. Very unique and rather splendidly written. |
|
|
Re: In Limbo
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Tuesday, 18th March 2014 @ 03:24:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| 'In the clear bath water is a perfect image,' now that's a great line reiterating need for clarity! Great imagery and indepth exploration of behind the scenes of family life and the last line making the personal search even more poignant. |
|
|
Re: In Limbo
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 01:18:44 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
beautiful, real -a breathing piece full of brilliantly created imagery,
hugs n' love nessa
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
