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Where did the sweet blossom go?
Contributed by
Northernlights
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Wednesday, 19th March 2014 @ 05:10:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Where did the soft side of life go?
When expression was free without thought.
When did I begin to carry life that is
Now so tangible to my awareness.
Where did the sweet blossom go?
I can still feel the voice that whispers in
Every summers' breeze.
The touch across my skin before life's smile.
So tell me what happens before the last
Petal falls?
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Re: Where did the sweet blossom go?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th March 2014 @ 12:32:34 AM AEST
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You write so beautifully and yet there is a melancholy tone to this. The last petal scares me because it sounds as though you're referring to death.
This is poetry in action. |
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Re: Where did the sweet blossom go?
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by spud on
Thursday, 20th March 2014 @ 08:00:30 AM AEST
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Hi Anna,
Beautiful!
Life happens before the last petal falls, and I'm
hoping that your poem is the result of detached
reflection and not related in a personal way.
T
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Re: Where did the sweet blossom go?
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 13th April 2014 @ 08:28:54 AM AEST
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there's Something about this flow
that keeps pulling me back,
well done. |
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Re: Where did the sweet blossom go?
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 01:04:10 PM AEST
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i don't know where that particular point is but have also felt it, and heard it,
hugs n' love nessa |
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