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Regret
Contributed by
Senates
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Friday, 21st March 2014 @ 02:46:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A hole,
Deep and dark,
Where the people go,
Failed to leave a mark,
A one way trip,
No light in sight,
A reality that cannot be gripped,
But no way to fight,
Surrender your lives,
The outcome is near,
Trying to survive,
An unanswered fear,
People unknown,
Left in the dust,
Feeling so alone,
Metal set to rust,
Regret foretold,
Men asked why,
Stories untold,
Faces left to die.
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Senates
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2014-03-21 02:46:19]
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Re: Regret
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 09:32:50 PM AEST
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Wow, this was really good....and sad. What a great write. cannot believe no one has left a comment on it yet.
A reality that cannot be gripped.
Great line. Lots of imagery here. |
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