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Thaw
Contributed by
Metalman173
on
Friday, 21st March 2014 @ 10:02:58 AM in AEST
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Its silent
I prefer that
Just me and my thoughts
Water under a frozen river
Yes, still flowing under the ice
Its nice
Being alone
Just me and my book
Why cant they understand that
No, Im not lonely
Its therapeutic
Drawing inward
Really, I enjoy this
I dont think I want to go
Ok, just keep me below freezing
Its warm
Going out
Standing in the room
Who is that over there
No, just wondering
Its melting
My ice
A crack has formed
Its kind of nice but Im
Well, a bit scared
Its frozen
Back to normal
He wants me to go again
Im busy freezing though
Wait, she will be there
Its warm again
Going in
Walking through in the room
Is that her over there
Yes, Im warm enough now
Its uncomfortable
Being this warm
But I can do it
Shes melting me
Well, its kind of noisy
Its too warm
Alone together
Its all new to me
We are breathing as one
Uh, the water is showing
Cracks form
Water shows
A dam is breaking
I am a flowing river
Im warm
Its quiet
I prefer this
Just me and my thoughts
Water in a visible river
Yes, still flowing after the ice
You can always flow
Dont mind the ice
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Re: Thaw
(User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on
Friday, 21st March 2014 @ 04:57:33 PM AEST
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| VERY well done. Draws you in.....good ending...I like this quite alot! |
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Re: Thaw
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by Apollonia on
Sunday, 30th March 2014 @ 01:45:22 PM AEST
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| Amazing I can almost hear the sounds of the crackling ice and the flowing water and feel that special love very catchy |
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