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It Was Always About You
Contributed by
Sherry_Gail_Heim
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Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 01:08:17 PM in AEST
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It Was Always About You
Come sit with me in my garden of love And I will tell you pretty lies Stories of my rebel youth And my rendezvous with spies
Stories to win your heart for me Of my noble and exciting life Omitting, though, quite handily That I already have a wife
Words to lure any simple girl Into believing I am a prince When all along I am just a man But the truth, a heart wont convince
So I tell you of my wealth and fame And of my valor so staunch and true And try to convince you in very short time That my heart belongs only to you
But the time has come to tell the truth Confess to my deceit and my lies Though the truth Im sure will break your heart It will release MY soul from this guise
Sherry Heim August 4, 2002 Copyright Sherry Gail Heim 2002
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Re: It Was Always About You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Suzy on
Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 03:32:05 PM AEST (User
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I actually have had this happen to me where he had a wife he "forgot" to mention...then as time went on I guess he must of felt guilty because after he had my heart in the palm of his hands he told me the news and it felt like he just crushed it I am sure he felt better about it tho....Live and Learn I suppose.....great write Sherry and thank you for the kind comments on my work...
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Re: It Was Always About You
(User Rating: 1 ) by ginsdance on
Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 05:58:35 PM AEST (User
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Men like this exist??? Nevermind, I know that they do... it's just so horrible that they can string people along like that and never consider anyone's feelings but their own!!! Great write Sherry... (and Lasca, I'm so sorry that someone did that to you. I'd tell you what I think they should do to guys like that but they would probably edit it.) Great write Sherry... this poem brought out a lot of emotion...
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Re: It Was Always About You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chrissie on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 06:20:38 AM AEST (User
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Hello Sherry, I enjoyed this one a lot and it's made an impact...very well written.
Chrissie x
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Re: It Was Always About You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Patricia_Petro on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 06:54:10 AM AEST (User
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Yes, some men do play this game. Liked this poem a lot. Very well written and oh so true.
~Patricia x |
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