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MOON
Contributed by
plasticherry
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Wednesday, 26th March 2014 @ 10:58:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You seem to have forgotten
Our passion and lust
So my heart became solid
And then turned to dust
I am the moon
In the shadow of you
My heart's full of craters
'Cause there is no one greater
Than you.
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plasticherry
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2014-03-26 10:58:03]
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Re: MOON
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by Apollonia on
Wednesday, 26th March 2014 @ 01:46:43 PM AEST
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| Amazing very catchy |
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Re: MOON
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by JacobJowers on
Wednesday, 26th March 2014 @ 07:33:49 PM AEST
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Even though it was short, it was very catchy and indeed did give a visual of a heart next to a moon. The heart changing over time eventually becomes old and tired, just like the moon.
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