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Oh Utopia
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Sunday, 6th April 2014 @ 12:56:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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oh
here comes that feeling again
I think I love her
and I don't even know her
but that doesn't matter
because
I love the way love feels as it's happening.
oh
Dreams of kissin' and caressin'
she's my fantasy lover
and although I may never hold her
she's got me so open
I'm wanting to be
her lover man.
oh
I never want this feeling to end
though she may never know
how much I want her
I want to thank her,
oh
I'm melting
I love this feeling it's fantastic.
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Re: Oh Utopia
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by EveAlone on
Sunday, 6th April 2014 @ 01:27:38 PM AEST
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"I think I love her
and I don't even know her
but that doesn't matter
because
I love the way love feels as it's happening."
So much truth in those words. There is something beautiful about growing old with someone and finding your true love. It is hard though to know if you have found that, and when you think of how new love or a new crush makes you feel, it's like a drug. There is nothing that can't beat that feeling. The happiness you feel. The little things that seem so great. The way the smell and feel. "Oh", love is a beautiful thing. Nicely, written. |
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Re: Oh Utopia
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 6th April 2014 @ 01:51:05 PM AEST
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| gorgeous |
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Re: Oh Utopia
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th April 2014 @ 04:49:48 PM AEST
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| Awesome!. Read like a song. Now that's poetry in action! |
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Re: Oh Utopia
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by Leoricx on
Sunday, 6th April 2014 @ 05:26:01 PM AEST
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I agree, this has the feel of a song lyric. And i think it's a sentiment many people will relate to - I know i have in years passed.
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Re: Oh Utopia
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 12:12:40 AM AEST
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this is beautiful, the flow is just lovely,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Oh Utopia
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by Apollonia on
Monday, 14th April 2014 @ 12:46:53 PM AEST
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Love it!
She must be a lucky girl even though she doesn't know it
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Re: Oh Utopia
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 17th November 2014 @ 07:59:50 PM AEST
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This is so sweet. :) Did you ever share this?
~Scorp |
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Re: Oh Utopia
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by emystar on
Monday, 30th March 2015 @ 02:46:57 AM AEST
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Wwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooo, I am behind.
very beautiful and very tantalizing.
Care to reveal who she is?
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