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Sprules House
Contributed by
greywolfe
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Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 05:38:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Across the green room
Unclosed the doors of summers full
Detained as stairways
Unsided still of days of nights
Aimless with eyes renewed
As futures pass ungaining
Searching like silence
With shadows long as memories dance
Tumbling still perfect
Unfailing with the waiting sun
Tearless as grief betrayed
Its patterns fade eternal
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2014-04-27 05:38:44]
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Re: Sprules House
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 06:45:46 AM AEST
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rarely is there someone who intrigues me so, i
love your poetry and this one is no exception
from well woven lovely words to the feelings left
heart, mind and soul,
hugs n' love nessa
@->->->--
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Re: Sprules House
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 07:37:41 AM AEST
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| I don't know what the hell I just read, but man, do I like it! That's the magic of poetry, I suppose. One is not required to conform to standard lines of reason, and can arrange words to 'yank' something from the reader. You did here- well done. |
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