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Overlord
Contributed by
greywolfe
on
Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 05:43:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Hereafter like a memory
Crying in a safe place
Day or night forever
Stolen with all alibi
Witness to the chasing
All feeling with the sacred
Forgiven still sustaining
Unallied then descended
Dismantled of illusion
Seeming though undoubted
Releasing in diversion
Chancing with the user
Passive in detention
Absent of all censor
Strategic as the loyal
Defenceless then replacing
Befallen of charges
Eager still with guidance
Needing of false rumour
Failing with intention
Wasted in reflection
Lasting as endeavour
Colder still with passing
Unfaltered then devised
Copyright ©
greywolfe
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2014-04-27 05:43:05]
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Re: Overlord
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 07:26:19 AM AEST
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What an interesting piece! Had to re-read it four times to get the semblance to form. This one is a little like murky glass on the first read...you can see through to the other side, but it's blurry...then each read is like a layer of dust removed and the other side becomes more clear.
It is still a little blurry, however. (not that poetry requires full lucidity...heck, that's part of what makes poetry...poetry!).
Cool stuff...thanks.
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Re: Overlord
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 07:30:28 AM AEST
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beautiful and interesting, love your opening line,
again; your writing style is entrancing,
hugs n' love nessa |
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