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MY Astral Body
Contributed by
Poetofheart2014
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Thursday, 1st May 2014 @ 09:59:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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As I slowly drift off to sleep on my bed
I feel myself jerk a bit then I slowly
Float out my earthly body and float to the
Ceiling. I look down and saw myself sleeping
On the bed below. And then I flew out the
Window out the night sky. As I flew up
The sky higher and higher I heard a
Voice fainting calling name in the distant.
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2014-05-01 09:59:30]
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Re: MY Astral Body
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by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 1st May 2014 @ 01:31:03 PM AEST
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I don't usually do this however this time I must. I'll keep my comment as painless as possible.
Delete this poem please.
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: MY Astral Body
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st May 2014 @ 09:43:59 PM AEST
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this is enchanting, so dreamlike, excellent
images! welcome to ypdc! i look forward to
more from you,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: MY Astral Body
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd May 2014 @ 12:00:48 AM AEST
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Things like this interest me. Astral projection, the paranormal, etc. I think you could have elaborated on the subject more.
I am taking a stab in the dark here but I am guessing English may not be your first language. If so, then you're doing very good!
You did a good job but that is why I am guessing you're not accustomed to speaking English because it seems some words are missing and some words are used incorrectly. Keep at it. You can only get better.
There are no experts here.
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Tim |
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