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Date
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 09:51:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Yearning for my soul to be set free
Begging yet again on bended knee
My heart's encased in knotted bows
Slowly melting for what it knows
Reach with open hands to implore
No answer as time chooses to ignore
Yesterday's devoured in today's meal
Tomorrow laughs as it doesn't feel
What hope is there when dreams die
Where's the comfort when hope cries
Search as I may, I can't find the date
When my expiration defines my fate
Copyright ©
dvtpdw
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2014-05-08 21:51:05]
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Re: Date
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 9th May 2014 @ 12:32:35 AM AEST
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brilliantly quite clever; each line is so strong,
perfectly flowing throughout- then wow and oh
dear: the end lines threw me for a loop, wasn't
expecting that! one of the best poems i've read
since i came back, it begs to be read over and
over; for it breathes!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Date
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th May 2014 @ 01:58:27 AM AEST
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Wow, simply wow! This poem really makes the reader feel the emotion! Very impressive. Very impressive indeed!
Tim |
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Re: Date
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 9th May 2014 @ 04:07:46 PM AEST
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Hi there
Very sad and emotional yet excellent poem. One can almost feel the pain and need to just be free. A lot of people in today's time can relate to this. Well constructed reads easy. Thanks for sharing.
Greetings
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