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Your Happiness
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Tuesday, 13th May 2014 @ 02:55:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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as i sit my room alone
i replay what has been done
the day before
i never meant to harm you
with words nor with actions
heaven knows
i am no saint
yet i m not a full sinner either
i rather your happiness to be first
than my own
your smile can light up any room
your kindness can makes someone's day
my own selfishness
has made me
the person i am today
i know i don't deserve your love
not even after forgiveness
so run along, my love
you deserve more happiness
than i can give
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PreciousKitten
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2014-05-13 14:55:21]
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Re: Your Happiness
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 15th May 2014 @ 10:23:34 PM AEST
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I don't really know how old you are, but I would like to give you a piece of advice. Never blame yourself. We all make horrible decisions, and letting go is hard. Maybe the hardest thing we have to face in our lives, but to draw it all in and say, "it was because of me" is a fallacy. The truth is that it's no ones fault. Sometimes people just aren't compatible, or there is miscommunication. Sometimes both parties are just too weak to see the truth.
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Re: Your Happiness
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 21st May 2014 @ 12:03:24 PM AEST
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I agree no matter how thin you slice it there is always 2 side no one person should take all the blame. Maybe it was no ones fault and wasn't meant. So relax pick up your chin and smile. It maid for a good poem that people can learn from.
Greetings
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