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SHIPWRECKS AND CANDLES
Contributed by
hray42
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Monday, 19th May 2014 @ 11:47:52 AM in AEST
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on those eerie nights in the light of the full moon
you can see the ghost ships making their way
all ahead full is the given order
all sails set to storm the bay
those lovelorn widows who walk with candles
seem like old photographs moving at night
they carry with them their heavy hearts
while crying for a doomed sailor's plight...
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hray42
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2014-05-19 11:47:52]
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Re: SHIPWRECKS AND CANDLES
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 09:22:48 AM AEST
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beautifully sad, a tangible glimpse into other lives,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: SHIPWRECKS AND CANDLES
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 03:12:24 PM AEST
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Nice use of imagery in so few words. I really enjoyed this!
~Scorp |
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