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Losing You
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 03:43:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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as tears steam down
my face
I wonder
what did I do
to seal this fate
the moment you left my side
my world has lost it's light.
every plan I had
everything I was looking for
was gone within
a blink of an eye
I have truly lost my other half
my best friend
who saw all of my flaws
and still wanted to stay
as I drifted off into darkness
I keep asking myself
who is really lost here
me or you
Copyright ©
PreciousKitten
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2014-05-20 15:43:13]
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Re: Losing You
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 04:01:51 PM AEST
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The ending gave me chills, and it really resonated with me. Very emotional, and straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Losing You
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 08:43:17 PM AEST
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How hauntingly you remind us that life will go on without us! Who needed who is the question you leave us to ponder. There are no winners .. only survivors, and an armful of questions in the darkness, as yours.
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Re: Losing You
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 09:17:02 PM AEST
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Good write.
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Re: Losing You
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by mvvenkataraman on
Wednesday, 21st May 2014 @ 07:24:24 AM AEST
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A good poem about a true friend
It in fact reveals a friend's real worth.
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