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Blissfully Ignorant
Contributed by
unforgiven
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Wednesday, 21st May 2014 @ 07:21:18 AM in AEST
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There is a fear of sleeping some,
A darkened room,
Silence that echoes.
The brain left to its own thoughts,
A frightening concept for a few,
Thoughts creep in as the light goes out.
Self doubt, hatred and loathing,
Worry such a tangible device.
Panic comes to those awake,
Walls of black enclose them.
The blissfully asleep remain ignorant,
Their breathing even and contained.
Inhale, exhale, inhale again.
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unforgiven
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2014-05-21 07:21:18]
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Re: Blissfully Ignorant
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by mvvenkataraman on
Wednesday, 21st May 2014 @ 07:38:49 AM AEST
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The poet has penned the truth only
He has narrated my experience finely.
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Re: Blissfully Ignorant
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 21st May 2014 @ 09:01:58 AM AEST
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I like this one. I'm one of those lucky people. When I go sleep. I SLEEP LoL.
I don't allow things or worries to deprive me of such a beautiful state of mind. If one could call sleeping a state of mind.
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Re: Blissfully Ignorant
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 04:45:54 PM AEST
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| interesting, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Blissfully Ignorant
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by softerware on
Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 10:23:59 PM AEST
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Gotta cast my vote for blissful ignorance…I like the line "the brain is left to its own thoughts". Wonder what it thinks about??
Haunting little write-- reminds us that when we shut down…we don't.
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Re: Blissfully Ignorant
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 10:16:11 PM AEST
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Yes, this is the majority
undone by what they do not
see
the blissfully ignorant
a crowded confused malady
seemingly unapproachable
they say history will tell
but the past will silently
roll along, the inundated
infinitesimals remaining
silent, as though
sound waves from afar
dissipate like a face in
the crowd, as the energy
or the particle takes on yet another
shape, and history
is meaningless again
to the majority or crowd.
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