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orignal typo
Contributed by
poeticjestix
on
Thursday, 29th May 2014 @ 03:23:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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Not angry
Not envious
Not willing to change
nor demanding a change
from you
Not hoping for a miracle
Not waiting for the same
Not minding as the clock ticks
again, again, again...
nor wanting a pattern
in a world of random
Not offering my friendship
or a way across the stream
that may be deep
or shallow;
and I avoid both if I can
Not staying in
just incase mail delivers
a direction
in which I won't fail...
but I just did
Not bothering to read?
I don't blame you
I'm sure I wrote this before.
.
Copyright ©
poeticjestix
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2014-05-29 03:23:48]
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Re: orignal typo
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 29th May 2014 @ 12:07:36 PM AEST
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I sense a certain ambivalence here. i hope you find a better place to be than this.
Poetically, I enjoy the turns of phrase and flow and beat of the piece.
Keep it up!
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