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Release
Contributed by
Zoey
on
Thursday, 29th May 2014 @ 10:37:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Release It comes and surrounds Over rides my system I cant take it The pressure builds and I cant take it Its not bad till im alone Meds only do so much But I know something for the rest Something to release the pressure The pent up emotion Take the knife in my hand Run my thumb over the edge Sharp enough Take it and run it lightly across my wrist Harder , harder Harder I have to press, I have a goal Have to see blood The beads press fromm your slits Thats enough for now People see, people dont see They only see what they want to see They dont care A little every day Cuts run all down your arm Crave the irritation Every day, its a habit I need it, I need release
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Re: Release
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th May 2014 @ 12:55:31 AM AEST (User
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~*:meant to tell you in my other comment, you are not
alone now, poetry is a great release too, hang out here
for a while and read some poems and get to know
some of us- and us you; truly raw heartfelt honest
write here, the images i see in my mind, i'm sorry
you are feeling this way tho i understand, keep
writing:) blessings,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Release
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 30th May 2014 @ 05:04:20 PM AEST (User
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I would like to echo the comments of Ladyfawn.
Poetry can be a release from the anguish of life, a chance to show the world your colours.
It is always interesting to be presented with the emotions of others, to help understand their lives and their pain.
Nice write.
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Re: Release
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 02:20:47 PM AEST (User
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Wow.......very deep and darkening post, yet you are releasing emotion through your penned post. Writing is a great mind, and stress reliever and just know, we all have a purpose here. DO NOT let anyone tell you differently. Thanks
brew~ |
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