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Child of Sorrow
Contributed by
northernlights
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Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 09:39:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Sorrow sits at the foot of the cross and weeps.
The life blood of innocence conceived of the complexity
Of youth ebbs and flows,salty pools mix terror and fear
With visions of sinfulness, rejected of humanity and judged
By God,she is alone to carry the burden,her finger traces
The word guilt onto an unlined forehead, and she is medically
Cleaned,religiously judged,and in the love she has for her
Child that lived, a dichotomy of the light of a full heart and the
Darkness of loss when in the eyes of life she was yet a child.
Sorrow sits at the foot of the cross and weeps..........
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2014-06-04 09:39:46]
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Re: Child of Sorrow
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 01:55:50 PM AEST
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this is so sad, i cannot even imagine the pain... this is
a moving tear bringing write...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Child of Sorrow
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 04:43:05 PM AEST
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| Pain is conveyed so strongly in this poem, in a beautiful but tragic way. |
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Re: Child of Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 09:28:21 PM AEST
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This is like a painting hanging on the wall and you describing it!
I am in awe, therefore it is awesome! I know quite often we as readers will use the word imagery when commenting but really, this is soooo visual and full of emotion. I cannot help but be impressed. You have that power.
I could see her, I could empathize with her.
♥
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Re: Child of Sorrow
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by Invierno on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 08:15:20 AM AEST
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I like your thought processes...we swim in similar waters. Well done, and I will look for more from you.
Best,
Invierno |
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Re: Child of Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 08:05:46 AM AEST
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| So filled emotions which are so vividly and uniquely portrayed. I really enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Child of Sorrow
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 05:12:04 PM AEST
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| i am in love with this write...amazing |
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Re: Child of Sorrow
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by spud on
Friday, 27th June 2014 @ 03:48:13 AM AEST
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Hi Anna,
We like to think that we have moved on from
the times when judgement and damnation
were the pronouncements put upon those who
had transgressed against the ''virtues of
decency'' - pulpit pontification, I think it was
called. Not so. They're still out there.
Innocence itself is a virtue that we should
embrace and protect, whatever it's form.
A somewhat sad but thoughtful piece.
T
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