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Fallible
Contributed by
northernlights
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Thursday, 5th June 2014 @ 09:07:53 AM in AEST
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Systems of humanity fallible by definition,
Play with the minds
Of those who still hold a tiny grain of Hope. Lessons to be
Learnt from the Negative, from observing dysfunctional humanity
And the Resulting destruction.Eyes wide open to the anarchy of no
Boundaries, eyes tight shut to personal blindness, bulldozing
Personas of egocentric belief, ears tight shut to learned wisdom
And the cogs of machinery turn, pressure builds, a cooker ready
To explode and there lying in the aftermath hidden beneath the
Rubble, "The voice of reason undisturbed .......
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northernlights
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2014-06-05 09:07:53]
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Re: Fallible
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th June 2014 @ 09:41:55 AM AEST
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Words of wisdom, indeed. Penned with considered intelligence and understanding of dysfunctional humanity. Liked the metaphor of the exploding cooker, and reason untouched in the resulting rubble.
'Eyes have they, but they see not' |
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Re: Fallible
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 5th June 2014 @ 02:05:41 PM AEST
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this is a thought provoking write, beautifully said- that
last line perfect, i love it, so fitting, so... true,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Fallible
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th June 2014 @ 09:47:12 PM AEST
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This sort of reminded me of the Terminator stories.
That was a passing random thought.
On another thought, the voice of reason sometimes can be subjective...especially when dealing with crazy people. Perhaps their "voice of reason" is their reasoning and who to say, really, what is wrong or right. Who really is crazy and who really is sane? Is it all perspective? Is no one right, is everyone wrong? I babble.
However the above ramblings is proof that this poem provokes thought.
Thank you for provoking me, Anna. ;-) |
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Re: Fallible
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th June 2014 @ 11:46:38 PM AEST
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Everyone said alot of what I was going to on this write.
It is wise and I agree!!Nicely done
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Michelle |
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Re: Fallible
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by emystar on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 01:50:23 AM AEST
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Awesome friend.
Great job.
hugs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Fallible
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by Invierno on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 08:13:34 AM AEST
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Kant meets the Terminator.
Invierno |
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Re: Fallible
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 08:19:56 AM AEST
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Nicely done, yet again!, especially the last line which we should all take heed of.
I always find it ironic that we talk of humanity, yet so many treat others so inhumanely.
Keep writing
Steve |
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Re: Fallible
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 03:51:38 PM AEST
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All I can say is I agree. Very good rite
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: Fallible
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 05:21:26 AM AEST
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Wow! Love reading your stuff, i haven't written in a longtime, but its great to return and read all these inspiring pieces.
Thanks for sharing
Daylynn |
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Re: Fallible
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 09:51:38 PM AEST
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| so full of wisdom and makes the reader really think..eye opening..loved it. |
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Re: Fallible
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by spud on
Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 02:55:41 PM AEST
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Hi Anna,
But will it be given a hearing? The voice of reason,
that is. The metaphors chosen for this thoughtful
piece are oh so relevant today, but imagine if
you had written this 70 years ago or so, would
they not also be relevant back then? Or even
say 70 years from now? Is the voice of Reason
destined to be permanently muffled?
As usual, much to think about in this fine piece.
T
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Re: Fallible
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 8th November 2014 @ 01:34:13 PM AEST
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| Yes, we learn from others.... And sometimes we learn what NOT to do. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Fallible
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by BumpyJ on
Wednesday, 17th December 2014 @ 07:45:10 PM AEST
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Word!
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