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Goodbye Friend
Contributed by
pat346
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Thursday, 5th June 2014 @ 12:50:17 PM in AEST
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I can't believe you're gone.
This whole thing is so wrong,
I mean you were always there when I needed a hand
and now you're not and i don't understand
We'd book shows together, and sing to eachother set's
We'd get drunk together, and smoke cigarettes
Now a friend is gone, one whom we'll never forget
Jamie, you will be missed
I can't believe we won't talk again
It doesn't feel real, waiting for my eyes to open.
Now your work is not left unsung
I guess Billy Joel was right, only the good die young
We'd joke around together, and see a movie or hit a bar
We even worked together, I'd pick you up in my car
But now my friend is gone, one whom I'll never forget
Jamie, you will be missed
You were 20 times the writer I am
But I hope this finds you well
I don't know if these chords or my sloppy words
will mean much, only time will tell
all I know is I'll miss you
and this ***** hurts like hell.
I'll miss you man.
so damn much
Later days,
stay in touch
Copyright ©
pat346
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2014-06-05 12:50:17]
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Re: Goodbye Friend
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 5th June 2014 @ 01:24:37 PM AEST
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i'm so sorry for your loss! this is so beautifully
penned, a loving tribute for your friend,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Goodbye Friend
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by CharM on
Thursday, 5th June 2014 @ 08:04:11 PM AEST
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| It's the hardest times in life we all encounter. Such an amazing tribute to your friend. I'm sure he's looking down and grateful for you writing it. |
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Re: Goodbye Friend
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th June 2014 @ 11:44:32 PM AEST
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So very sorry for your loss, this is a lovely tribute.
Your friend heard this one.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Goodbye Friend
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 12:28:47 AM AEST
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I am very sorry for your loss but life's struggles sure do bring out some great poems from people and here lies an example of that.
The very last line is awesome.
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Re: Goodbye Friend
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by emystar on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 01:48:04 AM AEST
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sorry for your loss I can totally relate.
You did a great job on this even in your sadness.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Goodbye Friend
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by Invierno on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 08:12:22 AM AEST
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Coolness. He would have dug it. Keep up the writing.
Invierno |
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Re: Goodbye Friend
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 08:58:32 PM AEST
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| nice tribute...well done. |
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Re: Goodbye Friend
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by speedy on
Monday, 16th June 2014 @ 08:41:01 AM AEST
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I lost a good friend eight years ago - it will always hurt, but the good memories will remain.
This was a great tribute to your friend.
Great write.
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