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The cemetery trees
Contributed by
Urizen
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Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 08:22:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The cemetery trees
Whisper low, he lives in me,
He belongs not of the earth but of the breeze,
He lives, he breathes, he lives in me
He's not some cold, old, grave
Crumbling away,
He's here, as he was yesterday
The cemetery trees solemnly say,
He lives, he sees, he's here to stay
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Urizen
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2014-06-07 20:22:25]
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Re: The cemetery trees
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 09:07:45 PM AEST
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beautiful from title to last line, after reading it a
few times it becomes addictive:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The cemetery trees
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 10:36:29 PM AEST
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melancholia, this is spiritual...
First thing you might feel
as you become really aware someone
is gone. But it's hard for them all there,
and the wind, as you say, whisper low, he lives in me..."
well done, short, descriptive. A balancing
tone. I really appreciate this one!
Thanks!
Peace! |
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Re: The cemetery trees
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by Tiny_Tina on
Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 10:41:26 PM AEST
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| The cemetery tree is quite wise. :) |
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Re: The cemetery trees
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 10:42:37 PM AEST
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"In the breeze he's still alive".
Love it.
Thank you,
For posting.
Tim |
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Re: The cemetery trees
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by Ferrari14 on
Monday, 9th June 2014 @ 05:35:30 PM AEST
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| Good poem |
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