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Love is an illness
Contributed by
ArloDisarray
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Sunday, 15th June 2014 @ 07:34:20 PM in AEST
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Dizzy, blurry, fuzzy vision.
Clumsy, awkward, two heart collision.
Distant, murky, failed mission.
Broken, dirty, freshly bitten.
Bubbled, scabbed, bruised and rotten.
Scarred, and frightened, not forgotten.
Wounded, beaten, lost and naked.
Born, and grown, dead, and taken.
Copyright ©
ArloDisarray
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2014-06-15 19:34:20]
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Re: Love is an illness
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 15th June 2014 @ 08:58:47 PM AEST
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the first four lines truly seem like love, loss, new love...
the last four like a nightmare, yeppers, not for me that
kind of 'love' but to each their own i guess... certainly
an interesting write:)
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Re: Love is an illness
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by Tiny_Tina on
Monday, 16th June 2014 @ 08:33:54 PM AEST
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You describe love completely and perfectly.
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Re: Love is an illness
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th June 2014 @ 09:47:21 PM AEST
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Love is not logical and I find myself agreeing with Tina and your poem. It truly is an illness...a plague of sorts o.O
Great poem! Thanks for posting.
Tim |
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