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Treesong
Contributed by
boomking
on
Thursday, 19th June 2014 @ 09:20:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Gently the wind strokes the trees,
as a flutist his flute.
She sings of joyfully understanding
ones part in the whole.
And as such she calls for a
heartfelt companionship.
Gently the wind touches the leaves,
as a guitar player his guitar.
She sings of truthfulness towards all.
Calls for more wisdom of the heart.
To be understood by the living soul.
Gently the wind touches the naked trees,
as a pianist touches his piano.
Playfulness of the divine order
of things is enjoyed,
by all who m's heart is beating
as one.
And as such she calls for more
oneness of heart, mind and soul.
Copyright ©
boomking
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2014-06-19 09:20:38]
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Re: Treesong
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by softerware on
Thursday, 19th June 2014 @ 10:16:54 AM AEST
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This is lovely, especially the tie in between wind and music. It has a gentle, swaying rhythm that echoes the cadence of the theme. You lead us so skillfully that we cannot help but follow.
I may never hear the wind in the trees again without imagining a symphony orchestra!
Splendid!
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Re: Treesong
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 19th June 2014 @ 04:05:55 PM AEST
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breezy and beautiful. thanks for sharing. took delight in the read.
Invierno |
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Re: Treesong
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 20th June 2014 @ 07:56:03 PM AEST
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so beautifully penned, gentle, flowing and so sweet to read,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Treesong
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 22nd June 2014 @ 09:51:22 AM AEST
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awesome song :)
-Ambivalence |
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