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So Much More
Contributed by
ruza
on
Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 05:03:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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So much of me
and so much of you
lies between us in glances
and near whispers
So much of my soul
wants to trickle out
from the corners of my eyes
and the quirk of my lips
And so much of your soul
is buried in your shirtsleeves
and in between your piano fingers
So much of your joy is hidden
in the metallic hues of your gaze
like an elevator door closing
and leaving me behind
And so much of my joy
is ripped right out of my chest
when you turn your head sideways and away
away from my hungry face
And I wish
I wish for so much more
so much more of you
Copyright ©
ruza
... [
2014-06-26 17:03:16]
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Re: So Much More
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 05:43:44 PM AEST
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| This is genuinely brilliant, its like a less filtered version of some of the fabulous work in Leonard Cohen's Book of Longing :-) one of my favourites, well done |
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Re: So Much More
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 06:56:40 PM AEST
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a beautiful write, the longing is tangible...........
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: So Much More
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by Ferrari14 on
Friday, 27th June 2014 @ 06:45:11 PM AEST
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| Unique |
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