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Two Of Me
Contributed by
texasman
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Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 11:00:16 PM in AEST
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Two Of Me
Sometimes it seems there is two of me
But Im not sure which one I am.
Am I the one that you can trust?
Or am I the one that is damned!
I tell myself I know me?
And the other one I cant see.
It troubles me so, to think I mitt Go
To a place, I should not be.
There is the one that loves the world
And well forever stand by you.
The other one thinks that I will fail
And never be good and true.
One can go on forever
The other lives on a shorter fuse.
Bough want to live forever
And they want to live it with you.
So if it seems that there is two of me
And you dont know which one I am.
Just pick the one you wont the most
And the other should never be damned
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2014-06-26 23:00:16]
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Re: Two Of Me
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 11:58:26 PM AEST
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Love the concept here and the flow was immaculate. However, you should do a spell check before you post...
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Re: Two Of Me
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by Invierno on
Friday, 27th June 2014 @ 11:17:42 AM AEST
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cool poem,. great concept
Best,
Invierno
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Re: Two Of Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th June 2014 @ 08:32:49 PM AEST
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good stuff, to tow the heights between
within different sides takes incredible
depth next to or beside the other who maybe has two or more themselves...
never to be damned, one leads to the other
though it's often difficult to understand
how real love grows... impossible as it seems, it does if you're lucky...
sounds as though you are!
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Re: Two Of Me
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 10:46:24 AM AEST
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Very interesting and thought provoking.
I think I am who I am and if there is another me. . .he is buried by the tides of the sea. |
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Re: Two Of Me
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by Geneva1223 on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 10:57:35 AM AEST
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| wow i loved this poem this is the best poem i read all day because it relate to me... sometimes i feel like a good person others times my anger carry me to the dark side so i understand and this poem is beautiful |
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