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Eyes
Contributed by
Jake
on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Looking deep into your eyes,
hoping for a glimpse of your soul.
I see only darkness.
A dark cloud hans over you,
but I see flashes deep inside.
Is it part of the storm, or deeper?
I want to see the storm finally break,
see the light deep inside you.
Finally set free to the world.
When the clouds finally break,
you will light the world.
The sun will come out the clouds will break.
Copyright ©
Jake
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2003-05-20 14:35:00]
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Re: Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cutey on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 02:12:08 PM AEST
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Wow that was so very touching most beautiful work i have saw so far on here
i can see all your work has to do with love
and some one you love great job keep
up the great job and work.
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Re: Eyes
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:11:46 PM AEST
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| that was very well written jake, very sweet and romantic |
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