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No Moon, No Light, My Heaven
Contributed by
silvereyesinwinter
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Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 09:53:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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What if the moon were to jump into the sea? How darkness would be much sweeter; Sweeter than ice cream; Dropping of the face of a young child on a hot summers day
When light refuses to shine When everyday is night When the clouds are gray and it lightly Rains on the cold heart that is mine
Freezing, yet turning away warmth Drowning my heart in shallow water In a desperate attempt to forget But no matter what I do, he keeps coming to the surface
In daily conversation, In the careless words of the ignorant I cant push out what he did to me Im always forced to confront it.
Whether its in my testimony Or someone who keeps pushing me to tell them that which I dont want to talk about Im always in front of the face of my attacker, my demon, my Satan I want to win and let go but hating feels so good And being in chains is so comforting...
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Re: No Moon, No Light, My Heaven
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 11:24:07 AM AEST (User
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interesting, vivid, great images, didn't go where i
thought it was going; tho i love where it did- so many of
your lines are off the charts excellent, a lovely read,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: No Moon, No Light, My Heaven
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 2nd August 2014 @ 04:08:07 PM AEST (User
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Bold imagery pulls the whole piece tightly together into a fluid and hypnotic write.
Loved reading this.
Steve |
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