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Doubting Love
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 01:45:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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as the days reach to nights
I often think
"maybe it was too good to be true"
the moments I spent wondering
will this love last forever
are often the same moments
when I think
"maybe, but I doubt it"
not every day is a war
but when it is
only blood and tears have been shred
there were moments where I felt
no amount of love can heal this wound
until you came up to me
and said
"wanna bet?"
all I know is that
love is the one thing
that no one can
live with or without
Copyright ©
PreciousKitten
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2014-07-01 13:45:26]
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Re: Doubting Love
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 01:47:57 PM AEST
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true, and beautifully expressed,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Doubting Love
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by weemick on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 04:33:59 PM AEST
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| Hello, a most touching piece you lay before us. Love can be the greatest joy but It can be the deepest sorrow and yet we crave It so and we take whatever comes. Your piece tells this well. It flows seamlessly from the begining to the end. I for one know I am complete with Love and I am absolutely nothing without It. A fine write. Have a good day. Catch you later. Youe friend always....MIKE. |
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Re: Doubting Love
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by desciple on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 12:28:22 AM AEST
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| love is war, an emotional toll that it takes on us. but the feeling that love gives you. that high it sends you on...it takes you away to this place that only each individual can describe as their own personal love....great write, keep writing, awesome |
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