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A Place Even I should Not go
Contributed by
invierno
on
Monday, 7th July 2014 @ 08:01:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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For whom do I write?
It should be for me.
Is it then truly,
or I am pretending, embracing,
again falsity?
I'm a tired subject-
this glass I am under,
the lens of myself so focused
it plunders.
What is left? My soul's been
laid bare.
How much of my stores
on shelves left to share?
I'm digging deep now;
the shovel is dirty,
heaving and sweating-
this thing that I am.
The bottom of me,
a place not meant for eyes,
creepy and crawly,
so heavy I sigh.
I've shown my face-
the one everyone sees,
I've even gone deeper,
I'm down on my knees.
The place that is left-
no one should know,
a place even I, Even I,
should not go.
Copyright ©
invierno
... [
2014-07-07 20:01:12]
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Re: A Place Even I should Not go
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 8th July 2014 @ 02:01:59 PM AEST
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Hello there bud
Shouldn't we all avoid that place. Over and above the fact that this poem is structured well flows nice its a good write about the forbidden. Blessings
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Rus |
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Re: A Place Even I should Not go
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 8th July 2014 @ 05:07:23 PM AEST
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this is beautifully expressed, i tho, am one of not worrying much
where i go, as far as writing, as long as i'm honest, and yes- i too,
write for me, with occasional poetry for others, keep writing, i'll keep reading:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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