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Who's counting?
Contributed by
flex4life13
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Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 07:10:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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As does a wounded hero, I lament in my time of sorrow.
As I sit, you stare, as I stare, you stir
Stirring in me a crystalized shard of past tomorrows
as I sit ever so sadly, it only then occurs.
Havent I been a gracious host, may I have another?
Wouldnt I deserve a toast, even now vile toxins not so sour.
Dastardly overstepping my own, clammy hands, dampened brows
overzealously paying no respect to my home, fluttery innards, ever so aroused.
After all I dont know if its true, I may be the one to blame,
taken too far, so far yet still too close
Overhaul, it neednt be a shame
so far, so far I have the most.
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2014-07-20 19:10:12]
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Re: Who's counting?
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 07:24:25 PM AEST
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vivid tangible imagery, its like a soliloquy,
a truly beautifully penned poem,
hugs n' love nessa |
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