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Oasis
Contributed by
tin
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Tuesday, 22nd July 2014 @ 12:22:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Island of green
choked by rock
colored not colored
visage of life
with death surrounding
forced to live
bleak existence
let it die
a mercy killing
Copyright ©
tin
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2014-07-22 00:22:20]
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Re: Oasis
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by shereal_14 on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2014 @ 01:45:20 PM AEST
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| I have never been able to write like this; i've tried again and again and it just won't come to me. Great write, keep up the good work! Blessings, Sheryl. |
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