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Whatever the Day
Contributed by
ramfire
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Saturday, 26th July 2014 @ 04:30:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I dont mind holding your hand
as we walk together down this lane.
I rather think the feelings grand
And I hope there wont be any rain.
I have an umbrella with little catch
in case the weather becomes a pain.
Well stay on the walk and be a match.
Whatever the day Ill not complain.
Two hearts as one you and I
Our talk will be of things not bane
Ill tell you that for youll I buy
a little silver broach and golden chain.
Youll squeeze my hand with excited smile
I know for you theyre the things most main.
Things of silver and of gold, things worthwhile.
Whatever the day Ill not complain.
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ramfire
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2014-07-26 16:30:11]
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Re: Whatever the Day
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th July 2014 @ 07:42:56 PM AEST
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ramfire,
Lovely poem! Just sharing the walk is it,
wonderful.
Thanks!
Peace! |
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Re: Whatever the Day
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by softerware on
Monday, 28th July 2014 @ 06:57:19 PM AEST
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Such a sonnet to acceptance Ramfire!
Love is not blind, it simply bends. "We'll stay on the walk and be a match." and my favorite " I rather think the feelings grand"…
I rather think your poem is grand!
softerware |
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