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Hold my hand
Contributed by
deathbringer
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Sunday, 27th July 2014 @ 11:36:03 AM in AEST
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Come hold my hand,
Look me in the eye.
Trust not in me
Believe I only lie!
Come hold my hand,
Now close your eyes.
Trust not in gods
Not even if it's I!
Come hold my hand,
And do not cry.
Thrust in this life
Can only make you mine!
Come hold my hand,
Please dry your eyes.
Trust in my arms
But not in all of I!
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Re: Hold my hand
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th July 2014 @ 05:44:30 PM AEST
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interesting choice of wording, twists and turns yet
it seems to be a love poem of great devotion, totally
thought inspiring,
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Re: Hold my hand
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by softerware on
Sunday, 27th July 2014 @ 06:06:17 PM AEST
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An invitation, a warning…turning circles. Your words spiral down like a seductive dance, beautiful and dangerous. This is a two sided coin, a riddle…
A well spun see-saw of abdication and entanglement.
You warn us not to entrust our fates too easily; and we would be wise to heed your counsel.
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