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Finally Found
Contributed by
ruby_star_angel
on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Lying awake at night, I hear
Voices whispering to fear
Darkness surrounds me, I cannot see
I don't mind, just let that be
Who owns these voices? What do they want?
I hear a colder voice talk back and taunt.
I wonder why the voices suddenly got lower
A sudden death chill; my blood flows slower
I sit up and look around
Nothing's here, nothing to be found
Still I hear and still I feel
I don't understand, let my mind heal
Whatever is in my room is in my mind
Whsipering so coldly, making my temporarily blind
When that fades, again, just black
Somehow, I grow fond; it keeps coming back
Awake for hours, it doesn't fade me
The voice continues, it stays to be
The other voices have disappeared
Almost as if our friendship they feared
Darkness and me, a perfect match?
Must be, since light is so unattatched
I enjoy it, its cold and dark
Look upon my heart; its eternal mark
To this day, its the darkness and I
It understands me, and I understand thy
Never am I truely alone
Forever to be in stone
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2003-05-21 07:05:00]
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Re: Finally Found
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by scott_milton on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 07:30:00 AM AEST
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| I like the whole flow of the poem, it reads well. Nice one chef! |
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Re: Finally Found
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 05:27:27 PM AEST
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Lovely poem, Manderz.
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Finally Found
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 03:27:36 PM AEST
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I like this so cold and dark and spooky. You definitely know how to write and express yourself. I hope use that outlet instaed of using other more destructive ones. A great poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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