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The Busy Still Life
Contributed by
invierno
on
Thursday, 7th August 2014 @ 07:39:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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There's that pond again,
deep and capable it brims-
a life of ideas-
ringed in tall wispy grass-
it would look so nice in just
the right vase'-
a tall one though!
Lopsided imbalance would throw
the whole pleasing image askew,
and starting anew I would
have to ponder-
new grass, new vase',
a whole new pond?
With the slightest quiver and shimmer
the surface,
placid when things are well,
now trills
and with a hair of disturbance
the quell is no more;
gone now
as my fingers reach
for pen
or pencil
keyboard
or quill-
anything to tame this
furrow, to attain a pond
still.
Copyright ©
invierno
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2014-08-07 19:39:37]
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Re: The Busy Still Life
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by JohnRhinem on
Thursday, 7th August 2014 @ 08:04:52 PM AEST
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| Man, if we could all have things our own way could you imagine ? it must truly be a headache for those whom continually try to shape as mold this or that ? Girl, just let myself float atop these tranquil trusted waves: don't need no vase nor, any puppets attached to someone's string poof, and there she blows up in smoke ~ Twinkle twinkle, little star * |
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Re: The Busy Still Life
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 08:33:10 AM AEST
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The search for a moment of pared-back clarity in the hectic humdrum. Beautifully expressive writing.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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Re: The Busy Still Life
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 03:40:21 PM AEST
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truly beautiful and great imagery,
hugs n' love nessa |
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