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The Changelings
Contributed by
softerware
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Sunday, 10th August 2014 @ 02:23:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Start life helpless; whatta mess!
Little seedling, more or less.
Cant sit up, or stand or walk;
Try to speak, but only squawk!
Little changelings-- hearing, seeing;
Human is the art of being!
Learn to balance, take a chance;
One step two stepsthen we dance!
Walking, jumping, climbing, smiling!
Smarter, faster, now were styling!
Feed the fire with endless learning;
Tiny spark so brightly burning!
We are different! we proclaim!
(Yet all the differents look the same)!
Now we speak instead of asking;
Measure worth by multi-tasking.
Cramming lessons in our attic;
Wake, work, sleep on automatic!
One-way speak our mode of choice;
So in love with our own voice!
Running just to stay in place;
Join the grown-up human race!
Missing life to make a living.
Tiny loved ones are forgiving.
Little changelings watch us grow;
Were we they not long ago?
All that stayed the same was change!
Day by day we re-arrange!
From lifes beckoning come hither;
Til our tangled branches wither;
We will bloom and shed and grow;
Leaving petals in the snow.
From the cradle to the casket
many gifts will fill our basket;
Not the least of which is love;
Which this wish to us is of;
May we always find our way;
Before the sunlight fades each day;
May seasons be our hearts allure;
And winding roads our signature!
Copyright ©
softerware
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2014-08-10 02:23:04]
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Re: The Changelings
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by JohnRhinem on
Sunday, 10th August 2014 @ 09:28:28 AM AEST
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| That was an excellent as wonderful read; perfectly flowing and a bouquet I would say: Muy Magnifico * |
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Re: The Changelings
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 10th August 2014 @ 11:34:49 AM AEST
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Excellent employment of rhyme; Steady, true, unforced and with content.
Well done,
Invierno |
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Re: The Changelings
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by spud on
Sunday, 10th August 2014 @ 12:45:53 PM AEST
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Hi,
Another journey taken down life's very rich
tapestry - and dancing from one experience to
another. Thank you for the ride.
S
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Re: The Changelings
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th August 2014 @ 10:18:45 PM AEST
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I be lovin' the metaphors!!!!
And what everyone else said. |
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Re: The Changelings
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 10th August 2014 @ 11:54:57 PM AEST
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Loved the way this flow'd
thanx for sharing.... |
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Re: The Changelings
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th August 2014 @ 01:53:50 AM AEST
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Beautiful!!!
Peace!
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Re: The Changelings
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by Spike on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 07:29:54 PM AEST
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| a lovely take on life's journey, and a fine read for this wet Sunday morning in Oz. S |
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Re: The Changelings
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th August 2014 @ 01:11:39 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful! i thought i was reading a
hallmark card lol! excellent lines and images!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Changelings
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 17th November 2014 @ 07:18:43 PM AEST
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This is so uplifting with a positive message throughout. I like how you wrapped it up with those final two stanzas. Very nice.
~Scorp |
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