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Tick Tock Tick Tock
Contributed by
waynster
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Monday, 11th August 2014 @ 11:28:10 AM in AEST
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Tick Tock Tick tock
the second hand turns so slow
Father time doesnt stand still
hes always on the go
An alarm goes off
as you try to stop time
The second hand still keeps on ticking
but youll still hear the chime
The ticking has a rhythmic nature
it tends to take your mind away
Father time has total control
theres nothing we can do or say
Take a deep breath
relax and do not stress
Its the beginning of your understanding
that you now have to address
Tick Tock Tick Tock
let the clock tick away
After all my friends
its just another day
Written By: E. Wayne Searles
11 August 2014
Copyright 2014 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
http://www.poeticquest-1.biglaunch.net
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waynster
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Re: Tick Tock Tick Tock
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by alicewhite on
Monday, 11th August 2014 @ 03:30:24 PM AEST
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The ticking has a rhythmic nature
as does your poem , The words sound out to the musical rhythm of this poem, really nice work |
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Re: Tick Tock Tick Tock
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by Voice of the Silent on
Wednesday, 13th August 2014 @ 11:11:51 AM AEST
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This one stuck out to me I wrote a poem long ago titled the same I think ironically though your take on time is different, but I like it clocks drive me crazy the ever present ticking of the clock always knowing I'm losing time in a sense, but I enjoyed this poem
good read
hope to read more soon
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Re: Tick Tock Tick Tock
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 6th November 2014 @ 12:51:40 PM AEST
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Just say NO to clocks! I've been saying that for years. :P
This title grabbed me, as I've said it recently in a comment. Great job with this...I like the delicate nuance you have weaved throughout this write.
P.s alarm clocks- straight from hell, those things.
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