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Panacea
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Thursday, 14th August 2014 @ 01:42:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Days come and go
faster now than ever before
alive with vigor
bubbling with energy
the earth spins
it's core
heats
an inner thaw
raw
with passion
eats
away
the decay
which dripped
from the surface
the very substance
that binds
man
to the dirt
a god came first
A serpent hisses
with precision
keeps him on his toes
let there be light
watch the apple fall
an iron fist
strikes down his foes
a separation
oceans and heaven
an inauguration
to the destruction
without speculation
a second hand account
of what transpires
when the fires
died down
when the riots
were dispersed
if the water should evaporate
what will wet his thirst?
please his perverse
fantasies
of making love
to many
many
pretty girls
simultaneously
without a care in the world
how absurd
to think of death
when alive
with health
all around him
he only needs himself
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2014-08-14 13:42:15]
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Re: Panacea
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th August 2014 @ 08:31:30 AM AEST
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What a superb poem, written in a style I see far too irregularly on this site.
Keep it up!
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Mickey. |
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Re: Panacea
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th September 2014 @ 11:45:06 PM AEST
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Your poetry is courageous
subliminal
Symptom as in abnormal
Sea roll
Green salty
Thing
I like free deep
All those fish
In this
Same world
barnacle and all that
It is good
Peace! |
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Re: Panacea
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 29th May 2015 @ 10:14:21 AM AEST
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If the water should evaporate
What will wet his thirst?
Well, if that little line doesn't sum up my predicament perfectly, I don't know what does.
I'm in need of a muse panacea...My well has dried up. Are you available for hire? Lol.
~Scorp |
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