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tomatoe toh-mah-toe
Contributed by
invierno
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Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 11:30:16 AM in AEST
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Get back in here!!!
Are you nuts?
You're twelve and that bra and panties-
why in the world would you go in public
in your bra and panties!
Get in here and put your bikini on-
we're going to the public beach.
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invierno
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2014-08-16 11:30:16]
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Re: tomatoe toh-mah-toe
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 11:58:18 AM AEST
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Love it! I've always found such a standard inconsistent--immoral actually. Glad to know someone agrees. Another great write,
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Re: tomatoe toh-mah-toe
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 09:07:36 PM AEST
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dear my friend invierno,
Doth poem is way to real, my daughter is 12 and very strange... beautiful and she wears too short skirts and shorts and has no idea... and yeah it scares the heck out of me. She's very cool btw,
has new glasses, draws wonderfully and writes stuff like a poet, and man she hates it when I read or look at any of it. My wife is close to her now, and that's very good. ME, she likes me, but,
I have to keep my distance as I'm a little to strict for her taste, albeit for her own good...
It sometimes sucks being a dad. Stay cool my friend, not like you need someone to say that...
Peace! |
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Re: tomatoe toh-mah-toe
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th August 2014 @ 10:45:18 AM AEST
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| Shrewd observation on double standards. And,no doubt the bikini was made of less material. We were a bit strapped for cash when I was a kid. I can hear my mother: ' Get back in here! What are you doing out there in your underpants! Oh, never mind, keep them on, we're going to the beach.' I guess poverty has a sort of solid consistency.(smiles) |
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Re: tomatoe toh-mah-toe
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 20th August 2014 @ 03:34:07 PM AEST
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Hi there my friend
Man I tell you this maid me laugh no bellow. I'm a dad to 4 girls and boy they can try ones patients. Oh yes and 2 boys but my girls oi vay they know just how to test dad. Cool write blessings
Greetings
Rus |
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