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Super
Contributed by
Tzeck
on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 10:17:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Super Moon
above a super Earth
and the balance between
rests on
a supermarket.
Copyright ©
Tzeck
... [
2014-08-16 22:17:52]
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Re: Super
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 10:29:42 PM AEST
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weirdly ram tangential
bright
balance I thought
or is it ballast
that is meant to be less
than slight
The superlative measure
of plight that is less
than discovered less
than anything that resonates
its voice
all under the same super moon
same sun same old Earth
same old you and same old
ordinary life.
I like your poem here Tzeck
In the banal balance perhaps in between
To eat or not to eat. but with few words needed/ same or never to be processed
or bleached
well done my friend!
Peace!
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